Murudai's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Rhino's Stomach]

Nice

Well animated, very nice graphics and a nice style you have there. Story seemed to progress a little slowly, but that's alright.

But I didn't see any stickmen fighting, fart jokes or sprite marios. So I think you may have got the wrong website, since that's all newgrounds is these days :P

Keep up the good, original work :)

grabbelfant responds:

I agree totally
I've to shorten my movies and improve the stories. But you won't see me making stickman fart jokes or sprite marios... well maybe one or two fart jokes, but only good ones... thanks for the good review

[Dumb Laws: Australia]

Fail

I'm Australian.

I can safely tell you that virtually none of these 'laws' apply. They look like they are from a history site. Taxis need hay (for horses obviously, used lots of horses ages ago) and long swimsuits (that was a requirement in US too about 60+ years ago). You've seem to of gottten all these laws from an old history site for sure.

The fact that you are trying to pass off some 100 year old laws as current is really silly, since the internet is a global community and any Australian can tell you that all the 'funny' laws in this Flash are 50 years outdated at least. When Australia had laws like this, so did the rest of the world.

For those of you still skeptical about Australia, here is another fun fact. HDI (Human Development Index) is a measure used to determine how developed and good to live in a country is, here is an article about it on Wikipedia. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Human_De velopment_Index . Australia is 3rd, America is 12th. 'nuff said.

Since this entire Flash was just text with these laws, you really don't have anything else since the laws a crap. You earn a 'fail'.

I'll give you a 1 because the map of Australia in the icon is infact Australia, well done.

tomashcu responds:

i know i am australian and none of these are true i reckon the site i got them off were just a bunch of liers

[Don't Leave]

Good work

I liked this one, excellent use of colour, graphics and animation. Music too!

Dialogue though... A little too long at the start. Needed to be shorter and sweeter. Also, the lip syncing was the weakness of this Flash. It isn't easy to get right, not at all. But getting it right is essential.

Looking forward to seeing what else you can do!

Jestercap13 responds:

yeah this is the first time ive done lip syncing and all that but thanx.