Murudai's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Rhino's Stomach]

Nice

Well animated, very nice graphics and a nice style you have there. Story seemed to progress a little slowly, but that's alright.

But I didn't see any stickmen fighting, fart jokes or sprite marios. So I think you may have got the wrong website, since that's all newgrounds is these days :P

Keep up the good, original work :)

grabbelfant responds:

I agree totally
I've to shorten my movies and improve the stories. But you won't see me making stickman fart jokes or sprite marios... well maybe one or two fart jokes, but only good ones... thanks for the good review

[Don't Leave]

Good work

I liked this one, excellent use of colour, graphics and animation. Music too!

Dialogue though... A little too long at the start. Needed to be shorter and sweeter. Also, the lip syncing was the weakness of this Flash. It isn't easy to get right, not at all. But getting it right is essential.

Looking forward to seeing what else you can do!

Jestercap13 responds:

yeah this is the first time ive done lip syncing and all that but thanx.